Fra: "suzenecampos" Til: Emne: [OFUM] Re: OFUMers! Here is your chance to have work featured in OFUM! Dato: 17. april 2003 17:50 I am such a follower... Here's a combo of my pet-peeves. Sadly, I don't think this is too far off of my usual writing style. ;) ============================================================ Warning: These don't belong to me Legolad belongs to Tolkin and the other stuff is from D&D. ***The Dark Elves chapter 1*** The prince elf sobbed and cried as his father hit him again and again with the heavy belt with the metal studs on it. The tall elf who was Thranduil (Legolas' father) kept hitting his son until he passed out, then locked the door and walked out of the room. Other elves watched him go and shook their heads as the smell of whine followed their king because he had been a monster since his wife had disappared some years ago. They all felt bad for prince Legolas but Tharanduil was king and they wouldn't stop him from hitting his son because he was king and could do what he wanted. The evil king kept walking down the halls of his palace in Mirkwood with strange steps and his eyes looked glazed, but anyone who saw him thought it was from all of the whine. Thranduil kept walking and walking, not talking to anyone, and kept walking until he was in the dark, cold dungeons of his palace, where there was no light. "It's done for the day." said the king elf, looking as if he were talking to no one. No one replied to him. "Legolas won't be around to interfere with the palns and if he tries, I will have to frame him for some big crime, like murder. I can always habe more children, after all, but I will need another wife soon, one who won't be as noseie as the last one. The power you promised me had better come soon, or I will do the same to you!" Then the evil king turned and walked out. In the deep, cold corners of the dungeon, someone chuckled. It was an elf with black skin and white hair a drow elf! "Soon." she whispered, rubbing her hands together in gleefulness. "Soon Mirkwood will belong to the drow and Lloth will be queen of the spiders!!!!" 2 B CONTINUED!!!!! (Plu-leeze R&R me? I will write the next chapter if you give me lots of nice reviews and NO FLAMES!!!) ======================================= Feeling sick. Must go cuddle Thranduil and Dinin... Suzene